Our Mission Statement

Me again

I've been trying to work out the Mission Statement we came up with on Saturday which can't have a semi colon where we put it! What we finished with on Saturday was:

‘Our aim is to connect young people with their local environment and with other like-minded people . We hope to inspire, educate and encourage each other and our peers through organising activities, events and projects;constantly making wildlife our main focus and embracing nature wherever possible.’

I've added 'peers' and modern technologies and moved some stuff around to come up with this:

‘Our aim is to connect young people with their local environment and with other like-minded people through organising activities, events and projects and using modern technologies. We hope to inspire, educate and encourage each other and our peers, constantly making wildlife our main focus and embracing nature wherever possible.’

What do you all think?
Sarah